By the end of this book, I was deeply invested in the main characters. I loved it. I delayed reading the last chapter so I could savour being in their world a little longer. I’m so tempted to give to give it 5 stars, especially while my book hangover is still raw. But I have to acknowledge where it didn’t fully hit home.
First, a small snippet of blurb as a précis…
Multiverse travel is finally possible, but there’s just one catch: No one can visit a world where their counterpart is still alive. Enter Cara, whose parallel selves happen to be exceptionally good at dying—from disease, turf wars, or vendettas they couldn’t outrun. Cara’s life has been cut short on 372 worlds in total.
Cara’s slim grip on life in so many of the parallel worlds makes her ‘Earth Zero’ self ideal to work as a ‘traverser’, gathering intelligence from parallel worlds that are sufficiently similar to Earth Zero. And so the scene is set.
The main conflict in the story comes from the two-tier society that has developed on Earth. There is the wealthy, enclosed, Wiley City, where the company “Eldridge” runs everything to do with multiverse travel; and there is Ashtown, in the area outside the city where pollution and poverty have a firm grip. Cara comes from Ashtown, but works for Eldridge in Wiley City. Cue conflict and tension.
Wiley City is believable as a community of the elite, with various levels of privilege, but it is in Ashtown where the author’s world building really excels. Here there is a gritty, multi-facetted society with power structures that have evolved around religion, prostitution, and a self-styled Emperor with his fearsome teams of Runners that wield his power. I could almost taste the dirt in Ashtown, and the power struggles were so well crafted that I fully understood the consequences of a wrong word here, or an unintended insult there.
And the writing style. I loved the writing style. I could just marinate in it.
An economy of words that could be evocative, blunt, eloquent, direct, poetic, or just plain gorgeous. I so often found myself smiling from the little rush of joy I would get from a phrase or paragraph that felt like a little nugget of perfection - even when it was used to illustrate something cruel or callous, to fill in the colour in a character’s motivations.
So what’s not to like?
I really struggled with the first 20% or so of the book. This is where the heavy lifting was done for the world building. This was establishing Cara’s credentials as having come from Ashtown, with a hardness of character and a set of sensibilities that have allowed her to survive, when so many of her parallel world selves didn’t. And I really didn’t like her very much. Then there is an extended visit to a parallel Earth that takes the remainder of the first half of the book. Again, this is critical world building, and was quite enjoyable as it was beginning to benefit from a pay-off of the earlier character establishment. And the consequences and differences of parallel worlds started to become really interesting. But I still didn’t understand where the story was going.
It was only in the second half of the book that the full pay-off for all of the world building and character establishment really kicked in. And then it *really* kicked in. The second half of the book was an exciting ride of twists and dense plot - fully taking advantage of all of the world building that had been done across multiple parallel worlds. This is where I really started to engage with the characters, and get to like so many of them… and I enjoyed it immensely.
So while the second half of the book is 5 stars through and through, I can’t fully forgive it for my struggles in the first half.
But here are some other random things that I enjoyed:
- The central conceit that it is only Earth Zero that initiates traversing isn’t ignored or glossed over, but is quite neatly explained, and even contributes to the plot. I appreciated this not-so-little detail, that is missing in some other parallel worlds stories.
- At the 50% point in the book, I made a prediction about what would happen to one of the main characters by the end of the book. And although it turned out that I was wrong, there was a moment when the character contemplated that course of action and rejected it. That felt like the author rewarding me twice: once as a nod to me having predicted it, and again for providing me with something else that was ultimately more satisfying.
- The mechanism for traversing was only obliquely ‘explained’, but is clearly intended to be entirely based on science and technology. However, the traversers themselves had developed a little mysticism around it that I found incredibly human.
Until this book hangover subsides, I will continue to find it intrusive and an invasion of privacy that other people have read this book, and may have become as attached as I have to so many of the characters.
It will pass.
My rating: ★★★★☆